■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : tha best way to learn about life is by listening to the advice of friends and family. | |
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In today's world, there are many different people living in this earth and each person has their characters, and viewpoint. In other words, each person live on making their unique life. So I believe strongly that life is created on my own, not created by others. Because of this fact, to learn about life , we need to make a lot of firsthand experiences and effort steadly.
Firstly,each people has different nature and value about life , so they whoever live different life from others. when one person make important decision on their life, friends or family could help indirectly but they could not determine the chioce because it is not about their life. Although if they might have more knowledge about related field than the one person. For example, a friend who have different major can not completely understand my situations so the advice from the friends does not help me.
On top of that, firsthand experiences are more effectively remembered on own's mind than listening other's experiences or advice. whether firsthand experience is successful or not , it makes one's life more affluent, fun and rewarding. Moreover , through the experience we can learn true meaning of life and make real unique life. For instend, my older sister decided to go to Australia to participate Working holiday program. Although My parents disagreed her plan , she went to Australia. Now she is very satisfying this experience and prepare another experience.
To sum up, life's real meaning can be otained by firsthand experience. We can make our life more copious and extraordinary through the real experiences not typical advice from others. So I strongly believe that the best ways to learn about life are endless effort to make unique life and a lot of firsthand experience . | |
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