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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some people agree that attending a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Other people disagree this statement. In this essay, I will describe that agree this statement, because of following reasons with specific details and examples to support my opinion.
First of all, I agree that attending a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television because I can express the my emotion as long as I can. I am a passionate person, who would often express the my feeling directly, which shout the voice, jump, hit the things. This is my personalty, really real. I live in apartment, where is too many people, have to keep the other people duty, that is not shouting, jumping, hitting. Here is, I have to keep many rules. For example, If I see the soccer game, our team became win the game. If that I really like the singer come the television, I can not express my feeling at that time. On account to live in apartments, I can not usually shout, jump, and hit. At that time, I would suffer the stress, because of hinder the many people. Thus I insist that is more enjoyable.
Moreover, I agree that attending a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television because I can focus on the favorite scenes. We are only see the monitor, which is limited by playing the camera, we can not look actual real situation, which is refined by directors. It is very insufficient things, that can not content the our demand. For example, If I go to the live concert, I can see the all the things. I like a guitar, If I go to the there, I can look only guitar performance. I can see the NG, which is real case, sometimes it is more enjoyable than the television. Thus, I insist that attending is more enjoyable.
In conclusion, I describe that I agree the statement because of above reasons, that I showed this essay, the first reason is related to express the my emotion as long as I can, the second reason is about focusing on the favorite scenes.
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