- Spend money on vacation and trips VS Saving money for future -
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In this competitive and economically challenging era, saving money for the future seems to be the ‘must have goal’ for everybody. As we never know the future, we should make hay for the rainy days. I also agree with that idea of building economic fortress, however, spending some money on vacation is as much as important, too. I would spend money on vacation rather than saving money for the future because I think being happy and living life to the fullest at the moment is more essential to me.
We all need vacation because we need to rest and refresh. Studies have shown that people can be more productive when they balance their working hours and resting hours. As our body need to sleep at night to live another energetic day, our working life needs to be left behind for another vigorous onset. For example, I’ve been to Hawaii this winter for trip and vacation. I had been working almost 80 hours a week for previous two years and I was completely exhausted. I left Korea to Hawaii and spend my whole winter there. In that beautiful land, where life seemed to be more slow, I spent my time enjoying so many things and refleting on my life. Though I spent huge amount of money there, I had no regret at all, for I experienced the ‘inner healing’ happening to me. I can definitely say I became a better person after having that vacation not to mention a more productive worker.
Also, I would surely go for spending money on trip and vacation for all the benefits of vacation and trip exerting on our thoughts and ways of life. Trip is another chance of personal growth. Going for the vacation means you go out of your familiar place and placing yourself in a new surrounding, people and experience, which can be a full combination of learning and challenge. Through trip, we can expand our horizon and deepen our thoughts on human and culture. That is why trip in the early age is so much recommended. After visiting Singapore for short trip, for instance, I started to study on Singaporean culture and history. I also bought East-Asian food recipe book, cooked exotic dishes and invited my frinds over! I even planned to study abroad in National University of Singapore and that plan is still alive.
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