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185 You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you
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Money cannot bring a total happiness but may bring a oportunity to be happy in life. Considering the advantages and disadvantages of each one, a business may bring me more money and a dream work experience i eagerly look forward to.
The Greater challenge is, the more oportunity you get. Challenging and risky, but buying a business also can be very potential itself. If you are good at investing and managing, you can make a lot of money than just owning a house. My grandfather had made lots of fortune when he launched his company in his old days, but the only thing he started his business with was just his passion and few pennys. I can purchase a house i gave up whenever i want after i make more money with my business or I will be able to buy a more fancy one.
I always dream of running a clothing line of my own since i was a kid and i would love to buy a fashion business and manage it by myself. It will be a great work experience for me before i get out of high school. Even if i fail at it, I will still be happy since I get to work on my dream job as far as i keep it from harming my financial situation. Not as just owning a business, this experience will bring me a importance of responsibility and confidence.
For these reasons, I would rather buy a business than a house. It has both advantages of that it is a great potential and opportunity and it makes my dream job come true. I consider challenging as one of my duties in life and I will never hesitate to explore in running business in this situation.
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