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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
In our surrounding, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. I think this statement is a bad idea, because of following reasons.
First of all, there are some disadvantages. First, they are not able to have a good score, because of not having studying time. In korea, most of all parents think that one's offsprings have to enter the best university, thus they have to study all the time, for students status periods. The best university is the same as actual success. This is a universal formula, in korean mind. For example, my young brother have earned one months, in that time he had a bad score, because of not doing studying, too tired, and under the too stress. After one month, he given up the job. I absolutlely think that teenagers do not need the job, for enter the best university, it do not help the teenagers to get the good score.
Moreover, I think this statement is a bad idea, because of not safing the teenager. As a rule, in korea case, there have not guarding the teenagers of law, rarely. Sometimes, they would experience bad situations, such as hitting the teenagers, not paying the payment, too low payment, and suffering sexual violence. To guard the teenager is not exist in korea, this big problems. For example, my friend do not have the payment, but long time later, he get the money, owners neglect him, merely teenager status. If our nation have a law, which guard the working teenager, it will not happen to teenager, and teenager will work in the secure circumstances.
In conclusion, I describe that teenagers have jobs while they are still students is a bad idea because of above the reasons that I showed in this essay. The first reason is related to not having time to study, and the second reason is about not safing the teenagers.
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