Do you agree or disagree with following statement. Do you think students can take a class not only in the classroom but also, out of the school?
In the spring season of the school, many school teachers try to have a class out of the school. Such as field trip and park class.
In the spring, many teachers and students try to have a class out of the school like a filed trip.
Some people worried about this, because it can make students many risks and also, students usually are not really focus on the class as much as inside of school class.
Some people worry about this because it could be risky, and students are usually tend to pay less attention on the class when they are out side of classroom.
Others say that out of the school class can teach students nature and personal relationship during the field trip.
However, others say that students can learn nature and personal relationship by filed trips.
I strongly believe that out of the school class has more positive sides than negative sides.
filed trips or school picnics.
Not only academic subjects are important, but also nature and new experiences are very important as much as academic subjects.
Nature and new experiences are as important as academic subjects.
Recently, many students do not have a time to play in outside, because most of the time, students are play the game and watching television inside of house.
Nowadays, many students do not have enough time to play outside because they spend most of their free time on playing computer games and watching television at home.
That makes them having a hard time to know about nature. Thus, out of the school class helps them to know about nature.
Thus, filed trips are required to help them to know importance of nature.
여기까지만... 열심히 쓰신것 같은데, 문법이나 문장구조에 너무 오류가 많습니다. 문장의 논리도 매우 약하구요. 너무 30분안에 쓰려고 하시지 말고요, 1-2시간 걸리더라도 문법적 논리적으로 완벽한 문장을 쓰려고 해보세요. 시험을 코앞에 두셨다니 힘들겠지만요. 계속 짧은 시간안에 쓰는 연습만 하면 정말 늘기 힘들거든요. 그럼 ..
Specially, it is important that teaching the students about nature and environment. The reason why that is students do not know about nature.
Teacher and students can develop their relationship. Most school schedules are very tough for teacher and students. They not even have a time to talk with their teachers about the weather or what happened during weekend. Consequently, out of the school class can make a time to develop their relationship. In my experiences, my history class had a class in the field. We studied the history and also, we talked how class should be fixing for next year and history teacher talked about every single person. After this class, our class gets more familiar than before. I firmly believe that out of the school class helps students various ways. It helps student to learn nature and, also, relationship between teacher and students. In conclusion, school should allow to class having a out of the school class.
가능하시면 점수도 부탁드려요... 시험을 코앞에 둔 가여린 학생이 ^^+ 정확하게 30분동안 쓴거에요... ㅜ.ㅜ;;