Classmates have more influence on a child’s successful school life than parents. Do you agree or disagree? (매일써야 되는데 바쁘다는핑계로 게을러지네요. 기본틀은 그냥 외울려고 생각중인데 전체적으로 맞는지좀 봐주세요. 계속 1시간 걸림 ㅠㅠ) |
Many people who have children try to be a good parents for their children. They want to be the best person who can have influence on their lives for a long time. I support that friends with classmates can more rub off on to their children than parents. I will give some important reason for my viewpoint as follows.
The main reason I agree with the argument is that classmates can get more time with children. From elementary school, for a long time, most children have to spend a vast amount of time on study in their school with teacher and classmates. As they go to high grade, it will be getting longer spending time to study in shcool. In addition, someone who is student in university usually live on-campus such as dormitory with classmates. Only the way that they can do is to talk with their parents on the phone, which makes them become estranged each other.
What is more, children share many things that can be interested in with friends their age and enjoy playing sports together, which make them become intimate more and more. Also when they have a trivial trouble with something such as parent, sibling and study, they try to talk with thier classmates. As they open their heart with serious worry, They can well rely on each other. some of students who are good at studies can be and object of envy. For instance, When I was in middle school, I know someone who study well in my class. I wanted to be a like them by studying hard.
From what I has discussed above, we can know how important making good classmates with friends is. children have to consider about when they get to know classmates. classmates would change child's successful school life. |