▶ Topic :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author’s claim that it is unplausible that Amazon has supported a large and advanced civilization are ample supports for the existence of Amazon's large and advanced civilization. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point. First, the professor contends that although the amazon had a dense vegetation, civilization could have been there. There were a few signs in the Amazon. For example, there were towns and villages in the amazon. This ancient remains can be the factor that proves that there was a civilization. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that civilization could not have been there because Amazon’s a lot of vegetations vegetation (vegetation은 셀 수 없는 단어 입니다) prevented amazon people from communicating. Next, the professor insists that the tools found in the amazon also sophisticate are also sophisticated. According to a recent study, there was a an island nearby Amazon. And in that region, there were vessels that had detailed symbols. This means that amazon tool was advanced. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that amazon tools was were so simple and did not required require high levels of technology. So they may did not have advanced technique to build big civilization. Finally, the professor argues that the region the european explores went was so vast. So they could not have found civilization. In other words, they failed to find. Moreover, find finding a civilization entirely takes a lot of time. For example, a remain of Cambodia had been eventually found in the mid-nineteen century. This refutes the reading passages suggestion that the European explores could not find any big civilization. They just found small tribes. Fair:17~23 점수: 23 대채적으로 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝을 잘 적절하게 비교하였습니다. 하지만 이 에세이에는 몇 개의 문제점들이 보입니다. 일단 첫 번째 문제점은 문법적 오류입니다. 제가 첨삭한 부분을 보시고 확인 하시길 바랍니다. 두 번째 문제는 리딩에 대한 정보가 리스닝에 비교하였을 때 빈약한 거 같습니다. 한 문장으로 리딩의 정보를 끝내는 것이 아니라. 리스닝을 반박할 수 있는 부분들도 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |