▶ Your Answer : 통합형 ///// In this set of issues, both the reading passage and the speaker discuss several aspects of whether a forgery was carried out by Michelangelo or not. The lecturer argues that the assertions made in the reading passage are not convincing enough. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that a forgery was carried out by Michelangelo.
To begin with, in the response to the reading, the speaker discusses that Giuliano da Sangallo was not Michelangelo's antagonist. Specifically specifically explaining, they were close friends each other. Michelangelo did not trick to his friend. this This contradicts the reading passage's claim that Michelangelo might have forged the Laocoon was to fool his rival, Giuliano da Sangallo.
On the top of that, the speaker claims that the similarity between the Laocoon and The Last judgement is account for Michelangelo was influenced by the Laocoon when his he painted The Last Judgement.This counters the reading passage's claim that the Laocoon's shows a striking resemblance to a figure in Michelangelo's work.
Lastly, (주어를 넣어주세요.) contest the reading assertion by saying that forgery was not common and accepted artistic practice during the Renaissance. Specifically expaining, In that period, the forgery was offense. In some serious cases, death is penalty of forgery. (이 문단은 전반적으로 손을 봐주셔야 합니다. 뭐가 누구의 의견인지 확실히 밝혀주세요!)
In conclusion, the speaker challenges the explanation from the reading passage on account of the reasons stated above. (시간 25분걸림, 글자수 총 215자)
독립형/////////
There is currently a debate about whether all students in a group should receive the same grade. The answer to this question can greatly vary depending on the individual's perspectives. However, after pondering upon the idea from several viewpoints, i I am of the opinion that receiving the same grade is not fair for all students.
There are two reasons to support my notion: the indiviual grading system is not fair and the individual system motivates thier good consequent. To start the argument, the individual grading system is the best idea because it is fair. Many students have different make a different level of effort when they prepare for their group project or other things. Some students do not their best in group. For example, when i I was in university, some of my classmates and i I were in same group. I was the leader of the group and I did my best Unfortunately, i was a leader of the group i did my best. However, the group project seemed like my individual project. i I did almost 90 percent of the project, while my classmates did other major assignment . Consequently, every members in group received the same grade. i felt that the individual grading systems are fair system. (앞의 내용을 통해서는 해당 결론을 이끌어낼 수 있는 게 아니라 '모두 같은 성적을 주는 게 불공평하다' 라는 결론만 이끌어낼 수 있습니다. 같은 것처럼 보이지만 둘은 완전히 달라요!)
On the top of that, individual grading systems motivate many students to do their best. This is because competition in the group helps bring the good consequent. According to a recent study in the from Seoul national University, 80 eighty percent of participants claimed that the students who participants are participants in the individual grading systems more get a better good grade. This is because the individual grading systems bring their motivate them to get good consequences. The students who participates in the individual grading systems concluded the study by saying that the grading system evoke their potential. (앞 문장과 완전히 똑같은 말을 하고 있기 때문에 아무 의미 없이 반복하는 경우밖에 되지 않습니다.)
In common purpose, i I can no longer emphasize that the individual grading systems are helpful for all students. THis This is because the system is fair than others, and they it motivates students to do their best. Opinions may differ from people to people, but what does not change is that this topic is something that needs to be addressed. (시간 30분 걸림, 글자수 총 337자)
총평: 통합형, 독립형 모두 우선 공통적으로 철자 오류와 대소문자 관련해서 문제가 많은 편입니다. 단순히 타이핑 과정에서 실수도 있을테고, 철자를 정확하게 익히지 못해서 생긴 문제도 있을테니 확인해보시고 필요한 단어는 다시 한번 복습해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 또한 문단 구분이 정확하게 이루어지지 않았는데 1~2문장이 끝날 때마다 엔터를 치는 것이 아닌 문단이 나뉠 때에만 나눠주세요~이러한 기본적인 사항들이 우선적으로 잘 지켜져야 글의 뼈대가 잘 다져질 수 있습니다. 수고하셨습니다 :) |