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Today's university students are suffering from so many difficult situation. They should be perfect students with high credits from every class along with many different licenses or certifications as well. Economic recession makes them hard to focus on what they like to do, but force them to do what the society asks to do. It is said that some universities ask the students to take history courses compulsory to get the degree, but I think that rule is outdated for today's situation. There are several reasons supporting my idea. In my opinion all university students do not have to take history course for the following subsequent reasons.
Firstly, like I said above, university students have so many things to do already even if the school doesn't ask them to take some mandatory courses students have yet a lot of things to complete. Especially, when the course has no direct connection to the practical purpose like getting a job, it will waste students' energy for nothing. Having better understanding about how their country formed is good but if the class costs their time to study major subject which is related to their future job, it has no meaning .
Secondly, students have the right to choose what class they want to take. They pay huge amount of tuition fee to school every year and school should guarantee the maximum quality of the school life and I think that includes freedom of class choice. As you people (독립형 에세이에서는 you를 서술하면 안됩니다) know the credits which students can take during the semester is limited and if they should give up even small credit for crucial subject to take history course who is going to be responsible for that? Someone who is majoring in math might have no interests or background knowledge in history at all, and if he should take that course according to school rule and got F at the end of the semester, whose fault is it? We should think about it first
Lastly, if one specific course remain as a compulsory course for a long time, the lesson quality will not as good as it should be. Lecturer doesn't have to put any additional effort to prepare the lesson every year because his or her job in the school is promised next semester as well.
With above reasons, I think the history class cannot be required to take to all university students
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