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Some people think that high school students are not necessary to learn basic economics. However, in my opinion, all high school students should learn basic economics. There are two reasons; first if you are not majoring in economic in university, it is not easy to attach economics (What does it mean?) when you go to university. Moreover, you can expand your general knowledge by studying economics. To start with, not all students will attach economics when they go to college. When you are in high school, all the students basically learn same subjects. However, if you go to college, you select subjects that you want to study more about listen. If you do not know basic knowledge of economics, then it will be difficult for you to know how the world crisis happened and decide how much to spend and save in daily lives you lost your job. For example, my sister was is majoring in chemical but she is not much interested in economics because her major, chemical engineering, was not significantly related to her study. While my family was talking about the IMF crisis that happened in 1997, she didn’t understand. It is important to know why IMF crisis happened even if you are not majoring economics. This relates is related to your living in near future and could happen again. Moreover, you can increase your basic knowledge through studying economics. Most of the high school student The goal of high school students is to go to a good college and get a high paying job. For this, they firstly need to take an university entrance test. It will help you during in university entrance exam or interview. For example, there was a questions about economics in Korean test. For students who knew well about economics were able to answer questions about national economy them quickly but for those who didn’t know, there were felt struggling to solve them in time. Also, when in a college interview, most questions are relevant to there was a question about Free Trade Agreement, which was a hot topic during that specific year. If high school students studied basic economics, it would be was easy for them to answer without hesitation. To sum up, students will have less chance to approach economics in college and economics will help high school students pile general knowledge, For these reason I firmly believe that all high school students should learn basic economics. 채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 1 | 2
| 2 | 2 | Score | Limited 10-17 | - attach라는 뜻을 어떠한 의도로 사용하셨는지요?
- listen은 subject와 상응하지 않는 단어입니다. 주로 lecture, lesson이 더 자연스러울 것으로 보이네요. - 각각의 문장이 연계가 되어있지 않고, 그래머 오류가 많은 편으로 보입니다.
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