▶ Your Answer :
Every idea must be affected by thousands of other cultures
as the number of people on this earth. Therefore, the given topic “After high
school, students should take at least one year off to work or travel before
beginning college” can also be interpreted as many different ways as the number
of people on this Earth. However, I personally agree with this point of view
for several reasons as follows.
Take one year off to travel before beginning of college
enables students to relieve stress. Understanding the daily environment of
students and potential role of trip is necessary to substantiate this view. To
get good great in high school students should endured countless textbooks and
continue to read more even at home. Such exhausting routine repeats itself and
eventually wear down students. As a way to relieve ensuing stress, student can
take one year off to travel before attending college. Even it is only for one
year, it will frees their mental pressure they got from the high school. My experience
can demonstrate this view. When I was in high school, I often felt depressed. I
often think my life become an exhausting routine as I always spent my whole day
studying all academic subjects. So after graduated from high school, I decided
to have journey with my friends. Purpose of this trip was to escape from
depression. Actually, I was able to escape from it by looking beautiful scene
and intermixing with people who have different cultures. If I had attended high
school right after graduation, I would not have been able to escape from
meaningless life. Therefore, I believe take at least one year off before
beginning of college enables people to relieve stress.
As societies
develop, the paradigm can shift. Ideas try to stay alive, adapt, and grow over
time to meet the need of contemporary societies. The given topic “students should take at least one year off to work or
travel before beginning college.” can also change as the society changes.
However, as things stand, I will agree for reasons I have mentioned. 저 질문이 있는데 이런 주제의 경우에 working 과traveling 각각 하나씩 support하는게 나은가요 하나를 선택해서 두가지 이유로 support 하는게 나은가요. off topic 될까봐 궁금하네요
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