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There might be some people who think
reading books about real events are rather better than fictional events better.
However, I think reading fictional reading is better. There are two subsequent
reasons to support my opinion. for the following two subsequent reasons. First and foremost, reading fictional book can
give us to imagine other world that we did not see before. To be specific, this
can lead people to experience new world by books. Even though, the book is not
real, people enjoy imagine and tends to be a tend to become a character in the book. For
instance, Harry Potter series were many people like it to read very popular. In this book,
there are people who use magic, flying to the sky and also use magic stick to
fight. Many people like this book, therefore movies were made. Moreover, after
those movies were end, there are plenty of people who like the movies and went
to England to see. They went to see Harry Potter Studio and see what beds,
clothes, dormitory, books were used in the movies. Because people like the
Harry Potter, they made people to eat candy, chocolate, jelly that were in the
books and the movies. In this angle, I think the reasons that Harry Potter are
popular are unique, mystery and fictional. Because of this, I think reading
those books are more benefit than just the real books
On top of that, unreal story of books made
people to get out of their exhaust real life. Reading book can be a hobby to
some people. By reading books, they realize about some information in the book.
Also books can make people to be comfort by the character what they are similar
to the readers. The most of the character solve their trouble that cannot
happen in real life. However, people feel that they also overcome the problem
like the character. For instance, my sister exhausted was exhausted by her school life that
she was alone when she was high school. Her friends are all were friendly when
she was elementary school, however they did not hang out after they were fight.
Because she had lots of time to be alone in school, she read books. One day she
saw ‘Frozen’ book, she became to be feisty. She did what she wants to do and
did not mind what other people think about her. In this angle, frictional books
can make people to be good than before become better.
To nutshell In a nutshell, books especially unreal story
of books can make people to enjoy and make to be change. Therefore, I firmly
believe that fictional books are better than real story books.
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