▶ Your Answer : agree some people think that the professor's most important responsibility is to conduct research. However, in my opinion, a university professor's most important responsibility is to educate students. This is because the professor receives tuition from students and they belong to university. for the following two subsequent reasons
To begin with, the professor receives tuition fee from students. During the semester, the professor should focus on the class. In my experience, when I was a freshman, my major class canceled for 3 weeks. The reason that the class skipped was the professor's research conference. So I was very embarrassed that reason. Because I deserve to take a classes.
Second, the professor is belong to university. The propose of university is to educate students. So professor's responsibility is educate students to educate the students. The reason that the professor conducts research is to pass on more knowledge than they knew.
In this regard, I agree with the topic that a university professor's most important responsibility is to educate students, no conduct research.
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