▶ Your Answer : Some people belive that watching internet based lecture is better than listening off line lecture. I agree with this because it is comfortable and you can spend less money, and you can study by yourself. Firstly, watching internet based lecture is better because it is convenient. You can listen to it anytime. For example, when the time goes to AM01:00, I am able to watch see the internet based lecture. Also, you just click a mouse.(의미가 크게 없는 문장입니다) As I go to somewhere to meet people, I always make up my appearance. But when I watch internet video, I do not have to make it up. I just press the mouse. Secondly, it(문장 첫 시작이기에 it이 뭔지 설명을 하는 것도 좋습니다) is cheaper costs down. When you go to academy, it costs huge. However, when you perticipate online class, you can save money. In addition, you can see other lectures by saving the money, you can join different class that you have ever learned. For example, when I got math class in online, I also learn other subjucts like English, Japanese. Finally, you can study something your own. You can plan your study schedules. When I listened to internet lecture, I could plan the schedule by my self and gain organized life patterns. Also, you feel confident with full heart. When you success your plan, you can feel very happy. I think it is better to watch internet based lecture because it is easy to do, money is spended less, and you learn yourself. Therefore listening onlind class is better than perticipate off line class.
우선 spelling오류가 진짜 너무 많습니다. proof reading아니더라도 그냥 한번만 보면 보일 것 같은데 왜 안 고치시고 내는 건가요? spelling은 어휘의 가장 기본중에 기본입니다. 다음부터는 주의해서 작성하도록 해주세요. 문법 오류가 굉장히 많은 편입니다. 에세이보다는 문장이나 paragraph쓰기 연습 하는 것이 더 좋을 것 같습니다. |