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써 보았습니다.
Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
We encounter chances when we should choose to stay the same or try some change in many aspects of life. Some people choose to keep their way while others look forward to new experiences. The two ways both have merits, but in the world of constant changes like these days, I prefer new challenges.
Adhering to the former traditions is necessary in some aspects. For example, laws preventing people from killing others have long been observed because they are essential for keeping a country in order. Like this example, there are some absolute values that should be respected throughout the history. In such cases, staying the same helps.
However, some fields such as technology and business require constant changes to survive. In case of technology, people are looking for more convenience electrical device than before. For example, in
Regarding personal experiences, I think trying new ways never experienced before is better. In my case, when preparing for TOEFL test, I never studied grammar and never got high grades on the former tests. However, I tried to study grammar this time, and now I think I will get good grades on the test. If I never changed my way of studying, I would have also failed the exam. In sum, trying new ways solves one’s present problem in personal experiences.
In conclusion, trying new ways are better than staying the same in that it helps one to improve and solve problems in most of the case. Therefore, we should try new habits whenever possible.