They insist it is waste of time and better to concentrate on their major. However, in my opinion, science is not an tedious and inconsequential
thing but it is something need to be more fortified through education. it is A waste of time.. 그리고 in my opinion 쓰기보단 더 강하게 하려면 그냥 thesis만 쓰는게 좋은거 같습니다
(또 it is something that needs to be more ... 이렇게 되야할거 같네요.. something 도 다른 단어로 바꾸시는게..)
Firstly, everything we enjoy is all about the science. the science가 아니라 science입니다..ㅎ the는 science 앞에 안붙입니다
things 자꾸 쓰시는데요, 그것대신에 더 명확한 단어들을 써주시는게 더 낫습니다..
we could realize how scientists came to conclusion and naturally acquire the way they think in sort of. 마지막 in sort of 없어도 문제없어요..
There is a research that the experiments that science subjects afford are the best way to develop creativity; 단어배치가...
(There is a research which concluded that science subjects afford the best way to develop creativity 뭐 이런식으로..)
In conclusion, there is no reason to abandon this course which teaches how to look something <-- 앞에 in short 쓰셨는데,, 이런거 쓰면 좀 약해보여요~
도움됬음 합니다~