Nowadays people put too much emphasis on personal appearance and fashion. *agree |
For a long time, personal appearance has indicated one’s characteristic and status. To get better looks people dress up carefully and check their face with a mirror. It is importance of appearance and fashion that is unchanged in this fast-paced world. In particular, nowadays people give too much attention on fashion and personal appearance. In my opinion, people spend time and money on buying clothes and cosmetics. Moreover, people tend to judge by one’s first impression and looks. To begin with, people waste a large sum of money and time on perchasing clothes and cosmetics. There are also lots of surgeries to change one’s features in these days. People’re willing to spend money and time for their appearance and fashion although it costs too much. Studies have indicated that spending for personal appearance accounts for nearly 40 percent of people’s whole expense. On top of that, many advertises shows people’s tendancy on looks; clothes and cosmatics’ advertises constitute almost one half of a magazine and a commercial. For example, my many friends know newly cosmetics well, and some friends underwent a plastic operation. They are anxious to undergo another surgery. They don’t care cost and time. In this sense, most of subjects in our conversation is personal appearance. In addition, people are judged by their appearance. Personal appearance is a significant role for one’s first impression or showing status. People encounter many diverse others. People don’t have enough time to know all of them profoundly. Therefore, people easily measure by appearances. In other words, the better looks people have, the more opportunites are available. For instance, my friend, Sunjung, took exercise 3 hours per day and bought expensive business suits for a job interview. She was finally employed in a large enterprise even though her college grades weren’t enough. She thinks her looks appeal to interivewers’ attention and favor. In conclusion, people occupy too much emphasis on personal looks and fashion. They spend lots of money and time to get better appearance, and even some people aren’t afraid to undergo a plastic operation to change their features. Moreover, people are judged by their appearance. This urges people to give too much attention. |
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