제가 롸이팅 아래같이 쓰거든요? 근데 점수가 15점 정도 밖에 안나와요.. 제가 쓰는게 그렇게 엉터리 인가요...?? 어렵겠지만 대충 보고 참삭좀...ㅡㅡ;; Whether children have to receive formal education from earlier childhood has been controversial among many people. However, I basically agree with the position that children have to start formal education from earlier childhood because early formal education helps children to be successful and learn social morality early. Most of all, early formal education enables children to get on in life. As a matter of fact, parents in modern society are so busy that they tend to can't take care their children. In contrast, childhood is very important too because first for the most part is always important. Accordingly, receiving education in childhood have a grate impact on all life. For example, I have read that human's main character is almost decided in childhood. From this data, I found that I will help my children to receive formal education early if I become parents. In addition, the education allows children to learn social morality earlier. Some people might say that, we are living in society that lost morality. For that reason, the people think that government have to strengthen law. Nevertheless, I believe that society is too likely to change by early formal education because our future is not law but children. Therefor, we have to start formal education earlier for our future. For instance, I went to a formal preschool and my teacher used to teach me traffic morality. For this reason, I never violate the law and than I never experience a traffic accident. From this case, I learned that early education more necessary in modern society. To sum up, I strongly support the perspective that children have to receive formal education earlier. this is because it decide our character and even our life. |