■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Since the beginning of the Industrial Revolution, countless inventions emerged and helped to facilitate human life. Some examples would be cars, bicycles, and airplanes. Some people would argue that bicycles have changed the world through its easy control. Also, there are others who maintain that airplanes were the most influential for changing the world since it greatly reduced time for travelling around the world compared to the past. However, among them, I strongly think that vehicles
To begin with, vehicles changed people’s lives in a positive way. Its development started to bloom when Henry Ford, the great car manufacturer, established his own car manufacturing company in the late 1800’s. His first inventions were mostly for the wealthy. However, he started to create vehicles affordable to ordinary American people as his business became successful everyday. And when cars were distributed nationwide, the US society started to change. Workers could commute to their companies regardless of how far they were located. This reduced the overpopulation of cities and created bed town where laborers who work in cities could be accommodated. Also, more family members started to enjoy automobile trips which contributed to the development of tour industries.
Furthermore, cars also greatly changed the world but in negative ways as well. Beside the bright sides of automobiles, harmful gases emitted from them polluted the air. When these troublesome gases damaged the Ozone layer, it eventually led to global warming. In addition, more and more car accidents started to appear and became one of serious social problems. It has been reported from the US poll that about 20% of mortality rates is automobile accidents.
In conclusion, I contend that automobile among the three options has pivotally changed the world in terms of reducing the overpopulation of urban regions an creating new industries along with creating environmental problems and new kind of mortality. It is undeniable that airplanes and bicycles have their own cogent factors for changing the world. Nevertheless, I have no doubt with proudly announcing that automobiles have influenced us in many ways. Current society would never be the same without cars. | |
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