시험치듯이 30분 딱 맞춰서 쓰고 그냥 올려봅니다. 첨삭 부탁드리겠습니다. 감사합니다.
Although some people say that lifetime employment help people to live their life more successfully, I strongly support the idea that if people work at the same company for their entire lives, they cannot spend life time more successfully. There are two logical reasons here. One is that lifetime employment decreases one’s productivity. The other is that experiences in many companies help to choose right one.
The first of all, life time employment cannot help to improve people’s productivity. Of course, people who work for only one job can do their works easily because they used to working their works. However, generally, people can become weary of the work and can’t work to their fullest potential.
For example, according to a study recently released by the Korean National Research Center, more than two thirds of the surveyed said that longtime employees show 30 % decreases in productivity. In case of my father, he has worked at the company for 30 years, one day he felt tiresome his job and he said cannot any works for his company due to he cannot have any chances promote. After all, changing the company he can have goals for his life again.
To illustrate my second point of view, people have more experiences in many companies can have more chances choose right one. Of course, Job with stability is important for life time. However, diversity also is sometime more important for job recruit. As far as I am concerned, it is definitely true that my diversity helps me to get a wonderful job. When I was graduate student, I wanted to find new job. Because, I had a lot of experience such as intern ship, travel abroad and working experiences I could find good and right job.
However, just as the English proverb goes, “a coin has two sides”, I must admit that advantages of lifetime job.
To summarize, there are two crucial reasons why I think that Lifetime employment not good for people’s life time. It is not only because it can decrease their productivity, but also because diversity can help people to get a job rightly.