When making an important decision, people should not make it alone but ask others for some advices.
첨삭좀 부탁드릴께요. 시간도 오바되서 수정도 못했습니다.ㅠ 급할때 제가 주로 뭐 실수하는지 알고싶어서,, 보이는대로 지적부탁드릴께요.. (시간이 얼마안남아서 얼마정도의 점수를 맞을 듯 한지 평가도 좀;;) |
It has been a controversial issue whether people should not make it alone but ask others for some advices when making an important decision. Some people may insist that person in having trouble know how to deal with that problem by himself. As far as I concerned, however, I think it is good to require some advices from others for the following reason: not only it can reduce trials and errors but also it can provide better solution. First of all, asking others for some advices for vital decision would save time and trial. To put it again, asked person who had the similar problem would advice what to do or what not to do. Generally, all of people go through some kind of trouble for their long life. Thus, if people ask others, especially older, they can not repete ineffective trials. To take one of my cousin Jennifer as an example, she could solve a problem in connecting internet more easy after asking for her roommate having the same trouble few days ago. Had it not been for asking her roommate, she would have struggle with the problem for a long time. In this sense, there is no doubt that getting some advice from others helps to diminish trials and errors. Another reason that I think it better to ask for others is that it make better solution. In most cases, a person can not come up with the best solution but more head can do. According to a resent survey conducted by “British Human Research Institute” compared the solving way of just one person, that of more than two showed 11.6 percent more effective, other conditions being equal. Like this, it is needless to say that request some advices of others provide better solving. All things considered, although it is not a black and white issue whether people should ask some advice for others when they need to make a significant decision, I would not hesitate to side with asking for others. That is because getting advice from others can provide less trials and errors and better solving way. |