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People, especilly educators, often disscuss which is better between studying at home by using computers or television and studying at traditional school. I stronly believe that studying traditional school is better than studying at home because of the assistance of experts;teachers, and developing socilites. I will present briefly these two reasons supporting my ideas in this essay.
First, students can receive the assistance of teachers by studying at traditional school. Of course, studying at home is somewhat positive because students can have their own time as well as feel a sense of accomplishment. In my opinion, however, the assistance of teachers eclipses this advantageous of studying at home. I think students have to get teacher's opinions since they can experience trial and error in studying. Also, teacher provide students with the path of their future, correcting their mistakes or weak points and finding their aptitudes. In this way, teachers can play an important role in students' lives.
Second, studying at traditional school has positive impact on developing their social skills. Getting along with a lot of classmates, they can learn how to interact with friends and control mind themselves. This experience is good for developing social skills. According to William James in his article, "the relation between sociality and the activities of school", nearly 80% of students who is studying at school have the highest level of the ability of social skill compared to those who is studying at home themselves. If students spend their time socialize with peers, they will expend their human network and their confidence level in interpersonal relationship will increase as a result. This illustrates the importance of studying at traditinal school.
To sum up, I firmly argue that studying at traditional school is more beneficial to student than studying at home by using computers or television. This is because students not only get many lessons from their teachers but also improve their social skills more and more. In this manner, I think studying at school is more important than at home.
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