People today spend too much time to pay attention to the personal lives of celebrities such as entertainers or famous people. agree? disagree? |
Some people said that nowadays a large number of people likely to focus their interests on entertainers’ private life. Of course, there are many people who do not care about who they are and what they do. However, I totally agree with the statement that famous people’s daily life becomes major topic of lots of people’s conversation for changing their level in a society and development of the Internet. To begin with, social statue of entertainers ranging from actors to singers is growing these days. In the past, a lot of publics did like celebrities yet they did not want to be like them. It is common that, in contrast, today, one of the most popular jobs is actors and singers. To demonstrate it, there is a survey regarding perception of publics interests on the celebrities conducting in the Korea Research Institution. The research indicates that only 19% people respect actor or actress in the last 1980’s. However, more than about 70% people in the 2000’s show their preference to famous people. In addition, advancement of the Internet attributes to much interest on the celebrities. Therefore anyone can upload famous people’s pictures or flashes that they see in streets, at restaurants and in malls. This means that access to the celebrities’ daily life is increasing by diverse mediums. For example, my friend called Wendy who likes the most famous actor in Korea, Dong-Gun, Jang, went to his apartment and saw him closely. I was so surprised when I heard the news since I liked him too. I asked her that how you know his address, she applied me that the source was on the Internet. At that time, I realize how big impaction the Internet has. In brief, positive recognition to entertainers as a professional job and the Internet’s development contribute to overly attention to the celebrities. Thus I agree that famous people’s life is the main source of conversation. |
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