Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
A live performance gives lots of pleasure to people. Some people maintain that they can enjoy the events lively. However, in my opinion, I disagree with this assertion because it is more convenient to watch the performance on television and we can save time and money when we enjoy the events on television.
Above all, we can enjoy the performance such as a sporting event with convenience by watching on television. Actually, it is true that the television provides accurate and clear image to us. We also do not have to consider weather conditions whether it is too cold or hot. For example, I had experiences of watching live soccer games both in a stadium and in the home. Conclusively, I realized that watching television was much more comfortable. This is because when I was watching television I could see soccer player as he played in front of me and its replay service was also great advantage. In addition, I could see the game in every easy pose and although it was rainy day I could enjoy their play with warm and mild ambience.
Moreover, watching television in the home saves our time and money. Usually, stadiums or performance places of concert locate far from our residences and fees of the events are quite expensive. For instance, we suffer from big traffic congestion and waste lots of time when we go watching the performance. We also pay much money to buy tickets. However, in the home, we just turn on the television on show time. We also do not concern such high priced tickets and can eat snacks and beer with reasonable prices.
In conclusion, I do not support the idea that attending a live performance is more interesting than watching the show on television. In the home, we enjoy the game or performance with comfortable and economical ambience.
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