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Some people say that the prize is given by students' effort rather than achievement.However, I strongly believe that it is more benefical that people are taken by their achievement instead of their effort This is because there are people who are born as genious , and effort is immesureable. To begin with, it is unfair to give prize according to the effort because people who gain high scores regardless of the effort can be more excellent than those who make hard effort. Some people think that success is decided according to how much they try to suceed. It,however, seems to me that the effort of people who want to succeed are eclipsed by achievement of others. For example, a person is very smart. so he or she takes good grade without any effort. By granting people to prize in terms of the effort , a person taken high scores can be unhappy about the result. Therefore, pize is given by achievement because this is the most idea methods when giving prize to both a genious and the averge person. secondly, it is impossible to measure the effort. As society is getting complex, people' living is getting complicated. It was to make enormous effort for success.However ,now then it is to find efficent ways for success. People play various roles,such a father, woker, and so on, in modern socity. This means that it is benefical for people to work with more effective methods than to make much effort. Also, as far as the immeasurable effort is concern, it is undesirable to give prize by measuring trying. This causes people using effective ways to have much complaint. As a result, people complain about the fact that prize is granted by measuring effort. so we consider more achievement than effort when giving people prize. In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that people should take the prize in terms of the effort because some people who take good scores without the effort have complaints about prize'giving methods and there is no way that effort is immeasureable |