The government has announced that it plans to build a new factory in your community. Compare the advantages to disadvantages of building this new factory in your community. Use specific details in your discussion. |
After the industry revolution in western society, whole world have sharply been developing until today. The key role of this grow-up was constructions of factories. Constructing factories is able to create beneficial advantages but also make disadvantages according to the situation planned to build it. In case the government has announced that it plans to build a new factory in my community, there would be some advantages such as gathering people and rising jobs and also some disadvantages such as lowering land price and polluting the environment. Building up a new factory by the government can make beneficial things for my community. First of all, it would make many jobs so that many of people will have more opportunities to get a job than before. This period that my town doesn't provide enough workplace, many no-job workers will rejoice. Furthermore, people will gather for the job and sales. Because it provides jobs, people come around it to work and live and then, some resident area and markets will arise. It will give good effects to the average economic rate of my town. However, new factory is able to bring bad effects to my town. To begin with, it pollutes the nature of my place. Factory makes air and water dirty during manufacturing. It would be harmful for the residences. Besides, land price will be down because of the pollution. For example, my uncle got lost his money a lot even though he didn't do anything just after a factory was built in his neighborhood. In conclusion, building a new factory in my community can result in both advantages and disadvantages. Creating many jobs and gathering a lot of people would be good effects but polluting the environment and lowering the land price would be bad effects on my community. Hence, I personally think that we should think the expected results over and decide whether we accept the building plan of the government or oppose it.
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