It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. |
If a large shopping center may be built in my neighborhood very shortly, I will strongly oppose the plan for my neighborhood as well as my personal life. In the following essay, I will intend to elaborate on the point mentioned above. Building a huge shopping mall in my neighborhood would give few disadvantages to people living in my neighborhood. First of all, my neighborhood would be probably so crowded that traffic near my neighborhood will be very bad. In other words, my neighbors as well as I need to endure traffic jam for the rest of our lives. Moreover, bad traffic might cause frequent car accidents and curious, careless kids from my neighborhood might be involved with them. In addition, having a large shopping center in my neighborhood might cause serious pollution. People from other neighborhoods would want to shop from the shopping mall we have and they will probably throw their trash away without any thoughts about my neighborhood. People living in my neighborhood would have to live in dirty neighborhood. What’s more, a large shopping mall in my community might give me demerits personally. Although I like going shopping a lot to buy my clothes, I don’t go shopping that much frequently since there hasn’t been a shopping mall near where I live. If the shopping center is built, however, I would go shopping as much as I can. Therefore, I may spend more money than I could afford. Moreover, I am so sensitive that I can’t either sleep or do my work where there’s loud noise going on outside. What I mean by this is that building a shopping center would make my neighborhood so crowded that my neighborhood would be very noise all the time. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the plan that a large shopping mall may be built in my neighborhood not only for my community but also for me. I know that having a large shopping center could have benefits such as creating more job opportunities and helping people living in my community be convenient. However, I think disadvantages affect my neighborhood more than advantages for those reasons I mentioned above.
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