0008 (AD) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. |
Some people argue that advent of television has destroyed communication. It is partly true. These days, children spend less time with their friends and more time watching television. However, television is not always bad. In some aspects, television helps people to communicate and understand each other much better.
The first reason that I think that television is often very helpful is that it makes family gather and talk to each other every day. In my country, various soap operas such as Family Story and Good Luck are broadcast every evening. Because these soap operas are describing these days' people's living, my family likes it so much. So my family gathers in the living room every 6 o'clock and watch soap operas. While watching, we talk about our days and make joke of each other. Since soap operas offer meaningful time to my family every day, I'm convinced that television is very essential to people's relationship.
The second reason that I consider television very positive for people’s relationship is that it provides people with chances to laugh together. As many research results show, laughing and smiling have positive effects on health. However, as the society is getting more competitive these days, people have less and less chance to relieve stress. For this reason, especially in current competitive society, it is very crucial to have as many chances to laugh and smile as possible. Fortunately, like programs such as Today's Comedy, many comedy programs are broadcast on television. These hilarious programs relieve people’s stress by providing time to enjoy funny comedy. My friends and I often gather and watch comedy television shows. While watching television, we bond together while watching television, relieving our stress from studying.
Third, we can watch various movies through television, and many of these movies remind us of importance of our relationships with many people. Current society in my country is too competitive. Students are spending almost all of their time studying for college, and adults are spending almost all of their time working for money. This means that we often forget importance of our family and friends. For example, I was so obsessed with the idea that I have to study hard so that I can get admission from a prestigious university. However, I watched a movie called My Family, and I almost cried because that movie reminded me how important my family is. So, I came home that night with a cake for my family, and I wrote letters to my parents. My parents say that this was one of the most impressive night in their whole lives.
Like mentioned above, television is not always bad. This gives people many chance to enjoy their time together. Since I was very young, my dream in my future has been movie director. I want to make a movie that emphasizes how important family is. I hope my movie is broadcast on television someday and remind people of importance of their families and friends.
495자 정도 썼네요!! 아 그런데 쓰고보니까 communication이라는 주제에 조금 벗어난 건 아닐까 하는 의문이 조금 생기네요-_-;아 황당... 실전에서는 이러지 않아야지..ㅎㅎ;;
대충이라도 평가좀 부탁드려욥! |