In this era of rapid social and technological change, leading to the greater complexity of society, some people prefer to work at big company because there are a lot of elite. Although I admit that it has its own advantage, after some reflection, it seems that is usually better working at the small company. The rationale behind my belief is that working at the small company makes me more familiar with coworker. On top of that, fellowship is indispensable on the path to success.
Especially given the situation today where economy market is highly competitive, fellowship is most important. To take a personal example, my sister Mi-Suk was working at the big company. But she didn't good job at the office because she has a no fellowship with her coworker. Thanks to Yong-Chan , she could change her job to small company officer. Had it not been for working at the small company, she would not have happy life.
In addition, people who working at the small company, can find meaning of their work. One critical reason for this is that they have a lot of time to think about their work. Research studies make it clear that. According to the researches, people who working at the big company are likely to 70% less comprehension about their work than those who working at the small company. Thus, when it comes to success, it is much better than working at the big company.
Simply put, I wholeheartedly believe that the benefits of working at the small company far outweigh the advantages of working at the big company because of fellowship and meaning of work. On the whole, with working at the small company, people can break through existing boundaries and self-perceived limitations in this complex society where change is happening everywhere.
첨삭 꼭 좀 부탁드려요 ㅠ 앞으로 꾸준히 올리면서 연습하려고하거든여.. 그리고 이렇게 쓰면 몇점 정도 나오나요..? |