29 Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is an argument about whether human activity destroys the nature or not. Some people maintain that human activity contributing to building convenient place. However, in my opinion, I support the idea that the Earth is destroyed by human activity. This is because human destruct the Earth directly for the purpose of development and human activity makes harmful effects.
Above all, human damage the nature directly when they want to build facilities which makes people convenience. The developer does not concern the damage of the Earth when their constructions are lucrative. For instance, there was a huge mountain which had lots of trees and beautiful landscape. My hometown located in convenient place to build highway road. Finally, the developers decide to destroy half of the mountain and construct the road at that position. After, the temperature of our hometown increases gradually, and in the summer season the mountain makes many problems such as landslide.
Moreover, human activity also causes some effects which give damages to the Earth. For example, after the industry has developed rapidly, new problem of environment appear in the modern society. These problems are apparently made by the human activity. Especially, green house effect is crucial problem which shows the increase of the Earth’s temperature. This effect is connected to lots of environmental unusual phenomenon which means the Earth is damaged. Though the development brings lots of convenience to people, but the Earth also is being harmed gradually.
In the conclusion, I strongly believe the opinion that human destroy the grand of nature because the example of the destroying the Earth by human activity and problems which are also caused by human behaviors of development. Hence, now, people have to cognize the significance of the nature and protect the Earth.
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