라이팅 스타트 4주6일 check-up 입니다. (어떤 내용을 써야 하는지는 책에서 제시해 주었습니다) 연습이니 평점이 몇점이다 길이가 짧다 이런 것보다는 일단 문법적으로 맞는지 알고 싶습니다. 도와주세요~ 토픽은 1년동안 여행 한다면 뭘 가져가겠냐는 내용이였습니다. Travling needs many something such as clothe and money. If it wrer up to me, i would choose a laptop computer first. Take a laptop computer has many advantage. First, it will help to learn about the new place. so, travling will be easier. For example, you can find a roots that you will go throught. and you can learn about culture, language, history, etc. too. Second and Third, you can write chronicle of the trip and use for fun. Computer can record lot of imformation such as picture and diary It will help to write chronicle easier and save lot of imformation. Also, it has many another function. When you want to rest, you can play game, watch video, listen to music. It can be more useful than i saied. For these reason, I'd take my laptop for my trip for a year.