some young children spend a great amount of thier time praticing sports. Disduss the advantages and disadvantages of resons and examples to support your answer. |
It is controversial whether or not it is an advantageous that young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. However I think having a time to practice sports is a good idea. That is because practicing sports is great for their health and their socialization.
These days we are living in technological society. Everything is well developed related to technology. So our life styles also more convenient than before. However I don’t think technological items always give us good affection. Sometimes those kinds of items are injurious to our health. The reason is people are getting lazier as they can use those things. My cousin, he just turned 9 years old, but he always tries to use his computer. When his doesn’t use he computer, he just watches TV on a couch. I have recommended to him play go out side, but he ignored it. I think it is a serious problem. He is a young child. He age also time to grow up. He should go playing some sports out side under the sun shine. I believe doing some sports probably helps his muscles and bones strengthen.
Therefore, I think practicing sports is also good for socialization. When I was an elementary school student, I loved playing sports, especially baseball. I belonged to my school’s base ball club. I spent a lot of time to practice baseball, because I was a baseball player of my school. That’s why I used to practicing baseball after school. One day a player of our team pointed out my pose. He said I had better change my bad posture when I catch a ball. I felt so bad, and I ignored it. The reason was I though my pose is not so important thing when I play baseball. However, the day I had an important baseball game, I made many mistakes. It was related to my bad posture. After that game, I realized how important to listen others’ advice. If I don’t play baseball, I will never know how to listen and accept words that other people said to me. So I think sports really help me become socialize with other people.
To sum up, I think playing sports really helps children. They can healthier and more socialized by practicing sports. The reason is they can get a chance to exercise outside. Also they can get an opportunity to communicate with other people.
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