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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do do not need. others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? |
We live in environment full of advertisements. There are so many advertisements that it is sometimes difficult for us to make a proper decision whether to buy or not to buy. Moreover, there are some advertisements that we cannot surely believe, so you should make decision after thinking about it carefully and for a long time. As a result, some people say that the advertisements are not really helpful for making decision when we purchase something.
This essay will search for several adventages of advertising. First of all, we can get a lot of, and important imformations from advertisements. In fact, we live in the flood of products today. Then where can we get information about those various goods? Firstly, of course, from advertisements. Maybe there are some other ways to get an information about products, such as using them directly or asking people about them. Though, for today, I think the easiest way to be exposed to information of new good products is to watch or hear the advertisements. You don't need to be tired searching informations about goods you want to buy, because we are in the middle of many advertisements always accessible. As a result, we can only pick one of them. The important thing is that advertisements give us basic information to help us with choosing products.
Second reason is more specific one. Today we can always face the dilemma of selection because there are many same-looking products around us. I can tell you the advertising solves those problems. Although you hardly believe the advertisements, you probably know that it cannot possible that all of the ads are lies, and the assential and fundamental informations given by advertisements are generally true. If you choose one out of several same goods from different companies, you can make decision by getting overall explanation from each advertisement.
Lastly, I can say that advertisements tell us about new goods that may improve our lives by developing our efficiency in decision making. Some people may doubt this statement, but I think it is true. Speak that there is one fine shoes you are eager to buy, and there are a lot of other similar shoes including each one's own advertisements as well as there is an ads of first one. You can watch all of those advertisements to consider what shoes is best for you in various aspects. If there is only one ad of one shoes, or there isn't any advertisement at all, do you think you can consider what shoes can be best for you, befor you buy one? In contrast, if various advertisements are available, you can choose one after much deliberation, so your ability to select products more suitable for you is likely to improve. As a result, advertising gives us an opportunity for having improved power of deision making as well as wide range of decision making.
The advertisements sometimes enthrall us to buy the thing not related to our initial plan and sometimes confuse us with their diversity. However, like several reasons I gave above, the advertisements give us more chance to choose good pruducts and to learn appropriate way to make better decision when we buy something for making our lives improved. |