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1. First, coffee can cause cramping and pain by stimulating the digestive system. Moreover, people are easy to suffer from withdrawal symtoms because of addictive materials in coffee.
2. Chocolate is very nutritious and has various vitamins like B,D, and E. Furthermore, chocolate makes people happy by facilliating secretion of chemicals in brain.
3. First, children watch other speakers and have more chance to follow their languages. Also, children's mental system is programmed naturally that enables to obtain grammer faster and easier.
4. Wine helps you to release and feel comfortable when you are in anxious condition. Because wine has an digestive aid which can support energy iinto our body. It also prevent from some kinds of deseases like cancer or heart disease.
5. Standardized tests only measure one's academic abilities. Also, some students don't do well comparing with their capability. Therefore, test scores don't indicate how successful a student will be in college and life.
6. Firstly, living with many family members enables to share parenting responsibilities. So parents don't carry the whole burden. Secondly, kids benefit from a more comfortable and released environment and get more warm affects.
7. First, Esperanto don't have any original roots so it can be qualified as a neutral language. It makes everyone equal because it's no one's first language. Secound, it's so simple to acquire that people can learn easily without any difficulties.
8. First, vegetarian diet is good for our health with lower saturated fats. Secondly, vegeterian diet has less growth hormones and other harmful matters than animals. Lastly, By eating vegetables, we don't have to kill or domesticate animals such as cows and chickens for meat.
9. Negative effects of group psychology include boosting people to miss their own character and begave unlikely what they used to. Positive aspects, on the other hand, people can get more happiness and pleasure in a concert or party.
10. First, mobile phones makes people hard to focus on their works continuously as well as distracting not to get any privacy. Secondly, mobile phones are noisy enough to make people vervous and unconfortable by ringing or loud talking in public areas. |