Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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When I asked many people why they do their job hard, most of them said, "to make much more money." But, Why? Why does he do his job hard? why does he want to make more money? The answer is only one, for happiness.
As you know, we can't buy happiness with money. how can we buy happiness with it? It's impossible. But, contradictly, we can get higher money, if we just have happiness. As you know, happiness comes when we are satisfied with now circumstance. When we are just satisfied with it, or have a happiness, our salary naturally will look much higher than before. Like this, money can't buy happiness, but happiness can make money much.
Moreover, our acts are all focused at happiness. Why do you play with friends? Why do you eat cookies? Why do you sleep? Why do you want make more money? Why? Why? After a while, I asked him one more, "Then why do you want to make much more money?", For a while, There were just two words, "for happiness." It is obvious that what we are all doing is only for happiness, not high salary.
Therefore, Being happy is far even more important than high salary. There is one saying, "We can buy everything with money except next three things. love, freindship, and happiness." We have to aim to not high salary but happiness. We shold not forget that All we doing is only for happiness not money.
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