아주 초보적이고 조악한 글입니다. 관심어린 충고 부탁드립니다. 흑흑 다른 아이디어도 좋구요, 아무의견이나 좋습니다. 혼자하려니 봐줄 사람도 없고 참 난감하네요. 감사합니다~ These are an argument regarding whether young people enjoy life more than old people. Regarding the issue, Some people insist that old people are more enjoyable their life because of many experienced people. Personally, I disagree with such a view for the following reasons. First reason is that young people have many opportunities than old people. In addition, they can more enjoys their life. |
To begin with, young people can do many things. Young people have good chances
than old people. Because most young people are health physically and emotionally.
However old people are usually a weak person. So they must take care of their health to
make healthier. For example, young people might enjoy extreme sports and leisure
while that is very dangerous for old people. Sometimes we can see that “Warning” or
“Caution” at amusement park, bungee jump, rock-climbing and so on. It is obvious that
old people must do not those! Also, people can more enjoy life. If both young people
and old people are travel over the long haul, old people would be tired easier and they
have difficulty adjusting to their long time travel. They won’t be able to enjoy the travel time. So, they are limited to do thing than young people
Most above all, young man has seething passion. Most health young man might want
energetic or aggressive their life. They could challenge new various experiences and
hope to get what they want things. When they achieve a goal, they might feel rewarding
And after they will try those continuously. On the other hand, old people might wish
more comfortable and calm for the rest of their life. They are already exhausted their
life because they used up their passion and energetic at a young age.
In conclusion, young people have many good conditions to do enjoy. Beside they can More aggressive what they can do because of conditions physical or outgoing.
Therefore, I firmly believe that young people can much more enjoy and get many thing to do.
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