Some people prefer to live in a small town.Others prefer to live in a big city.Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. |
Nowadays,developments of transportation,which make people to live more useful in our daily life.Thus, to move house is easy to all and have many choices about where to live.For example,countryside, big city, small village, and many others. If I have only two choices wether big city or small village, I would prefer to live in big city. I have three reasons to support my opinions.
First of all, many parents , who have children, will think about move house to big city, because of better education system than countryside's education system and also for their children's future. In big city's circumstance for education is better than others because most of famous private academic centers are in the big city and many parents concern about their children's result of schools.
Secondly,in my opinion, people , who live in big city, they are different from people, who live in countryside.I think that people, who live in big city,they are different about the ways of thinking that they think one thing as logically, wisely and widely.The cause is that most of student in big cities are well educated student, except for few students because of the circumstance in big city.
Crucially, in big city, we can use or experience many good facilities like public libraries,big department stores, police station, fire station, and many other useful facilities. Thus to live in big city is safety than small village and we can do anything that we want like learning b-boying, poppin , rockin or magic that is not easy to find the place to learn.
In conclusion,I would prefer to live in big city because there has many good advantages and functions that make us satisfaction with living there. |
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