"When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Luck has something to do with success. Some people experience different results although they put in same amount of effort. How can this be explained if success is not dependent on certain mysterious x factor?
While I was going to college, I used to study intensively with my friend for one semester. We both met up in a subway station and headed toward the school library in every morning. We have left home together and spent most of the times together while taking classes. However, at the end of the semester the result was totally different. I have received good grades to expect scholarship and he ended up with worst grade in his life. What could have caused the problem? We thought over, but could not come to a tangible reason. I believe this is due to luck, an x factor which can not be explained.
Although luck will influence our success, it has to stand hand in hand with hard work. Luck is not the sole factor of success, rather one of the key elements of success. We shall not rely on luck to succeed, since it is just one of the factor.
As mentioned in the above, luck has to assume hard work to achieve success. It is difficult to change your luck, but you should be able to grasp your luck when it is your turn to be bestowed. Moreover, you always have to be ready with hard work to grasp your luck which will lead you to success.
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