73. Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People use computers everyday lives and computers are now a part of life. There are many advantages and disadvantages from computers. I think the computer has made our lives easier and more convenient because it can make our works more effectively and it can do something in which people can't do.
First of all, computers help our works more effectively than do without computers. Computers can do complex calculation, arrange data more easier, and etc. For example, when I use my computer, I can calculate very complex calculations and help my homework better than do without computers. I always get many homework in school and usually do it by hands. Hand making is time-consuming and not effective. I finish the homework for an hour. However, when I use my computer, I can do homework more easier than do by hand making. I can finish my homework for a half hour.
Secondly, computers can do something in which people can't do their abilities. For instance, people can't do somethings which contain complexity and hard working. However, computers do that things by using their systemic equipment. If there are complex working which can't be solved by human such as space developmental projects, people use computers to calculate or average the amounts of planets or stars by using the computer systems. It can make result faster and more accurately than by hand making.
In conclusion, there are many protestants who doesn't like computers and want to get rid of computers in the world. However, our lives are an depended on computers in many parts of our lives and then we can't remove computers. Therefore I think the computer has made our lives more easier and convenient.
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