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In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that Prairie dogs are harmful for several reasons. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reason as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor contends that Prairie dogs do not distract the land. They even make the land stable. (How stable?) Moreover, when the dog digs the land, many holes are created. (Then what?) be occured . However, the hole causes rain to absorb into the soil more quickly and easily. This means that the dog's characteristic behavior does not make ground erosion. This casts doubts on the reading passage's claim that Prairie dogsmake ground unstable due to digging and making holes.
Next, the professor insists that there is less chances for the Prairie dog to carry disease. There are a lot of rodent, like rats, in our surroundings. They also have fatal disease. However, in fact, the number of encountering to the Prairie dog a is more smaller than the number of meeting rodents (Awkward sentence) and people do not have any physical contact with the dog. Thus, reducing the population of the Prairie dog is not dose not necessary. This counters the reading passage's claim that the Prairie should be removed because they infect the profound desease to human with diseases they carry, causing an to untreated injury.
Finally, the professor argues that the Prairie dogs does not have negative impacts on food supply for livestock. In fact, the cattle eats nutritious foods while and the Prairie dogs eats the top soil. This mean that the soil quality can be elevated by them elevating by the Pairies dog. This counters the reading passage's claim that the Prairie dog's population should be diminished because they eats livestock's graze significantly.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Score | Fair 17-20 | - 단락마다 띄워서 서술하여 주세요. - Spelling error가 많이 보입니다. - Smaller 비교급 사용에 유의하여 주세요. - the number of encountering ~이라는 문장을 It is less likely for people to meet Prairie dogs or People have less chances to run into~등으로 나타내주면 좋을 것 같습니다.
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