▶ Your Answer :
The writer argues that there are several
reasons why the online lecture system is not credible. On the other hand, the
lecturer cast doubt on the writer’s argument.
First, in the lecture, it is unlikely that
student who studied on internet doesn’t have enough passion compared to student
who studied in school. The lecturer said the student who concentrated in front
of computer, without delaying their study, is motivated enough. This challenges
the author’s assertion that physically going to school is the only way to
demonstrate the motivation.
Second, the speaker said there are no
evidence to claim that student can’t do experiment appropriately in online
system. To be specific, online allows them to do lab work in their local campus
and students can recreate lab using the internet program. This contradicts the
reading passage that some kinds of subjects are not preferred because there are
no infrastructure that student can utilize for actual experiment.
Finally, according to the lecture, it is doubtful
that employer can’t believe the certification from online system. Because there
are strictly regulated certification compared to the past. Also many standards
can be available to employers to evaluate the online system. This is in direct
opposite to the writer’s claim that many employer wants traditional graduation
student for the reason that certifications from online institution are not
credible
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분이 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 리딩에 대한 정보를 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박 할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술해 주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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