▶ Your Answer : There has been a debate in recent time concerning with what would I change one of the important things about my country. In my opinion, I truly believe that establishing the law for the poor or changing the education system with two reasons. To begin with, I would choose to establish the law for poor people if I can get a chance to change a thing about my country. According to my little brother, Josh always argues that poor people in my country do not have any opportunities to get any information about how to be supported by the goverment for their lives. For example, if a person who do not have any money, they cannot be supported by the country because they have no idea about the way of getting supports from the government even though they cannot keep their lives due to the lack of money. Likewise, my counry should develop the supporting laws for the poor to make the society that everyone is able to keep their stable lives. On top of that, if I cannot choose my opinion written in the first passage, I would choose the idea that changing the educational system because it can grow a lot of great people that can develop my country's economy. These days, many people say that the quality of the current educational system is bad and poor because of the lack of teachers' passion. If the government change the system into the new form that gives much money to teachers, people working in educational jobs would work harder compared to the past, which means the new form of the educational system can make better education to make well educated people who will positively affect my country. And also, according to professors from Stanford University, they maintain that ninety-two percentages of countries who changed their educational mechanism could make the better society by well educated people. In this situation, I think my country should change the educational system for the future. To sum up, taking all of these things into the account, I have already arrived at the rational conclusion that I would change the important thing such as setting supporting rules for the poor or changing the current educational mechanism for my country. It does not means I completely ignore the demerits of my opinions, but I think its merits can cover its demerits. So, I would choose my opinions written in passages if I could change a thing about my country.
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