▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that the news media can provides people with trustworthy and just information. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, media corporations tend to extort the truth. (Because of what?) To be specific, they are likely to report news to make people think in a certain way. They could be controlled by certain business companies or politicians. For example, I will talk about my father's experience to illustrate this point. When I was in middle school, he were was running a company that produces and sells milk. However, a certain media corporation established a company to make milk, which became a rival in dairy milk business. That media began to report news about my father's company, which were not true. (What was the news about?) These ungrounded rumors threatened By this, my father's own had a hard time in running his company. From this experience, I realized that the news media can be biased to because of its interests.
On top of that, the news media is likely to exaggerate a fact. (For what reasons?) To explain, since they have to make a profit they are likely to make news more stimulating. They exaggerate and contents and try to make them to be shown more sensational can use the exaggerating method to allure citizens. More exaggerating, more profit. A survey was conducted by the Korean Broadcasting Association with 1,000 citizens as respondents. The purpose oh the survey was to understand the consensus view of the sincerity of the news media. The majority had responded that they did not believe all the news the media reported. The overwhelming 75% had claimed that it is not so reliable. Since it also run the business that a major source of profit of media corporations comes from advertising to audience make money, it is sometimes necessary for them to contain misinformation to make themselves powerful and profitable for them. To create profit, it had to make small news to be big one, which can have people be captivated. This survey demonstrates that people does not trust media as a whole.
To sum up, the news media is inclined to make fact extorted and exaggerated. In this regard, I filmy believe that the news media is not trustworthy.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 3
| 2 | 3 | Score | Fair 15-18 | - likely to 보다는 고의성이 있으므로 intentionally 적합할 것 같아요. - milk business로 하지 않고 낙농업의 diary로 많이 표현합니다. - 첫 번째 내용의 잘못된 정보를 담은 뉴스에 대한 내용들이 구체적이지 않고, 꾸며낸듯한 느낌이 많이 드네요.
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