■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : What is the most important ability that a high school teacher should have? Chosse one. The ability to help students to plan for their future. The ability to find the students who need help most and help them out. Teach students how to learn outside the classroom |
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It is debatable what is the most important ability that a high school teacher should have is . It is an intriguing question because opinions regarding this topic can be different relying on the individual perspectives. In my opinion, however, I support that the most important ability that a high school teacher should have is to teach students how to learn outside the classroom. This is because it can be helpful to make students broaden their perspectives and it is more practical. First of all, students can broaden their perspective by learning how to learn outside the classroom. As modern society is becoming globalized, today's world requires people with opened mind and international perspective. Learning in only classroom has an absolute limitation to make students think creatively. For example, the study conducted by New York Times has shown that more than 70 percent of students learning outside the classroom state that they feel their perspective has been broadened by learning outside the classroom and moreover they prefer teachers who teach well them what is outside the classroom in quality. Because they think it is more helpful for them in regarding to their life. It is legitimate to say learning outside the classroom is helpful for student in high school and high school teacher should have this skill. On top of that, learning in only classroom is not practical. As modern society is becoming globalized, student have to go into the world not living forever in classroom. Therefore, it is more important to study outside the classroom to meet today's trends. For example, according to the poll done by Korean National University, one of the most prestigious universities in Korea, it revealed students think learning in only classroom is not practical and they want to study outside the classroom. Moreover, some high schools increase the percent of outside teaching to meet students and their parents' needs. All things considered, I firmly believe that the most important ability that a high school teacher should have is to teach students how to learn outside the classroom. It is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been delivered precisely and effectively with the reasons mentioned above.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 철자 오류가 잦은 편입니다. 심한 감점의 요인이 될 수 있으니, 에세이 작성을 마치시고 꼼꼼히 검토해주세요.
3. 문법에서는 시제에 주의하면서 에세이를 서술해주세요.
4. 에세이가 너무 general 하게만 쓰여있고 specific example은 거의 없습니다.
디테일 위주로 분량을 늘려나가주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*