■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : 실전 Actual test Test 2 통합형
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▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage contends that there are three possible theories for the cause of TLPs. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict the reading passage’s argument. First, the lecturer mentions that the fact about the existence of TLPs around the craters is a coincidence. To be specific, the crater is a feature of the moon. Also, not only are there no possible explanation of how much gases are emitted, but also the amount of gas expelled is known to be very low. (Not only 도치 ~~~ , but also 평서문 형입니다) This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim about clouds of lunar caused by lunar gas. Second, the speaker argues that there is no indication of storm. There is little amount of dust on the surface. Especially, according to the investigation, the flat rock contains no dust. This counters the author’s assertion that the TLPs occur due to the reflection of floating dust on the lunar surface. (내용이 너무 없습니다. evidence를 다 써주세요.) The final point made by the lecturer is that there is insufficient data to be explained. The reason for that is there are a few data that can explain magnetic storms, however, there are even more data that cannot rationalize the solar flares. This rebuffs the reading passage's argument that TLPs are generated by solar radiation. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
3. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*