■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Movies are worth watching only when they teach something about real life. |
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▶ Your Answer : Some people think that only
movies that teach something about reality are worthy. However, I believe that
it is worthy to watch movie about nothing, like entertaining movies for two essential
reasons. This is because movies made only for fun enable people to earn a lot
of money and relieve stress. First, entertaining
movies enable people to earn a lot of money. Understanding the movie industry
and the potential role of directors is necessary to substantiate this view. For
example, superhero movies like iron man, and captain marvel in marvel cinematic
universe earn a huge money. Even though those worlds depicted in movies are fake,
people all around the worlds love them and directors in charge of computer
graphics, art design can benefit from it. In this regard, entertaining movies give
people chance to make big money. Second, entertaining movies
enable people to relieve stress. In response to the increasing role of entertaining
movies made just for fun, my experience demonstrates how entertaining movies enables
people to relieve stress. For example, when I feel really tired and get a lot
of stress, I just need something to relax and make fun of it, not makes me
think about a lot of issues in real life. I just turn Netflix, and enjoy entertaining movies
without thinking and it helps me a lot to forget about my reality problems and
leads to relive stress. In this regard, entertaining movies enables people to
relieve stress.
To sum up, I believe
that movies don’t always have to be serious and teach something about life for
the following reasons: earn money and relieve stress. Consequently, the importance
of my view cannot be underestimated for the reasons I have mentioned above. |
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