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Some people think that the best films are not related to whether they contain contents which provide lessons about real life. However, in my opinion, the best films are movies which provide real life’s lessons. This is because people can get abilities to solve their problems, and they can get knowledge which can help other people. To begin with, people can get abilities to solve their life problems. Generally, the movies contain stories which provide life lessons that deal with how to solve life’s problems. Therefore, people can obtain diverse means which can solve their problems through these movies. I can take an example of my experience. When I was in high school, I had a problem with in my friends. My friends had a plan to bully other students and I could not participate in the plan. However, I could not tell about my feeling to them. At that time, I watched a movie dealing with the relationships of friends. The movie said that honesty was a very strong way to solve the problems of friends. After watching the movie, I told my feeling to them frankly and they decided to stop the plan. On top of that, people can obtain knowledge which can help others. Life lessons can give a lot of knowledge to people. Therefore, people can use their knowledge from the movies which are made up of life’s lessons to give advice. For instance, when I was in university as a teaching assistant. Many students wanted to meet me to talk about their future. At that time, since I did not have much had the shortage of helpful knowledge for their future, I just gave them cliches. One day, I watched a movie and the movie coped with people’s future. The movie contained helpful books and diverse knowledge for people’s future and it was very beneficial for me to help my students. After watching the movie, I was able to give many students beneficial advice and many students were satisfied through conversations with me. To sum up, I believe that the best movies are those that provide real life’s lessons. This is due to the fact that people can get abilities to solve their life problems, and they can obtain knowledge to help others.
Good (24-25) 전체적으로 내용/이유/예시 다 좋습니다. 두 본문 다 personal experience인 것이 아쉽습니다. 하나 이상은 인물/사건/통계/역사 등의 보다 객관적인 예시를 드시면 더 설득력 있는 글이 되고 더 고득점의 기회가 있습니다. 문법/표현 실수 좀 있으십니다. 수고하셨습니다~
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