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In the generality of cases, all adults are not aware of their yongs: about hobbies, fovorite subjects and their friends. Parents have high exepectation, emotionally attached, and short of expert information. Some people believe that parents are to become good teachers, but I'm very against th idea that parents are not the best teachers.
First of all, parernts are not good teachers because their expectations are often too high. For example, they push their childeren too hard. In my case, when I was a student, my parents got angry with my poor grade. Also, they don't give to them room to make mistakes.
In addtion, grown-ups do not make the best teachers because they are too emotionlly attached to their children. Parents pass on their own desires to their yongs ;they may limit choeises and freedom. For instance, childen like sports, computer games and coolking but parents would force their children only to study.
Finally, most of the adults could have not proffesional knowledge; some parents does not attend a college. Although they have attended a college, they doen't know the other areas except their field of study.
As long as grown man have their too high anticipation, emotionally attached, and lack of the proffesional knowledge, parents are not to be the best teachers. Though we cannot perfect, we must persevere in our efforts to their the best teachers.