people are incapabel of being satisfied with what they have: they always want what dhey don't have. |
Except some people who realized that nothing is certain in this world as like master of a Buddhist priest, every each one person has desires even they have enough. However, I totally agree with the idea that there is no one who satisfied with what they have had, and always want what they do not have, in the world. This is not only because it is natural characteristic of person but also because too much attractions from around. To begin with, persons’ inborn characteristic is always desire to something. From my personal experience, my parents had promised me that if I get high score the examination for mathematic, they will buy me a fancy handbag. After I get high score, I have got fancy handbag as my parents promised me. Nevertheless, I could not satisfy with only that present. I wanted to have a wallet, shoes, and luxurious clothes which is becoming with that handbag. People never stop their willing to get or buy something for them. In addition, there are various facts that people are attracted by surroundings such as television commercial, telephone commercial, and Internet. Those many factors make peoples’ desire increases. For example, recently studies show that people get addicted to buy new things getting enhances due to television commercial program which advertising a various type of productions show. Since people exposed to the wealth of advertisement, To sum up, people in the world are incapable of being satisfied with what they have because of natural characteristic of people and attraction of surrounding. But what if people have no desire or satisfy what they have, world would have been really boring. Because we have that characteristic, love, friendship, and problem still exist. |
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